you feel all too familiar.
i watch the faces -past
a shattered mirror i glance
and all the screams come echoing back
were they your words or mine -unsure
i boldly go where no man settles
in hearts of gold at every turn
find myself
running faster than daddy told me
as i pass i hear the echoes
in a forest -taller
as i search rocks and leaves
only the messages have vanished
my only relief, a pocket of rocks
as i swallow harder
drink deeper
let the air rise higher
form clouds for the dry soul of their lives.
Incredible indeed
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Awww… thanks for saying so. I wrote it in a trance state. Ever write like that? It just flowed like a river. ?? Cool feeling!! ๐๐งก๐
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Yes I have! I know what you mean.
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Extraordinary, J
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Thank you so very, very much. ๐ค๐งก๐
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what an incredible piece of writing.
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Its funny i get the most compliments on the stuff i spend the least time on…2 minutes literally. i need to learn to channel this inner dimension more often. So many distractions get me off course!!
By the way, thank you for saying so. Always J๐งก๐
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Well done
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Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it. Manna from heaven today…
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Your encouraging words manna… not mine. ๐
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